The perspective is wrong on both this and the original... thie one is oriented too far down, the previous too far up. The newer one is closest to what it should be though.
Trying my best to work out fixing that perspective.. I view this kinda thing as needed practice for myself.
Left two are my latest edit, middle is what it is right now, right is what it was before. Figured i'd try to demonstrate what I meant by putting it on a table and comparing it to the plain cake we've already had.
Man.. I wish I could actually do the final touchups officially for the stuff in the game.. this kinda thing is so much fun to me.