should have turned the girl 180 degrees horizontally, so the flat edge is against the side. . . also, zoom in and cut out your toon from that grass.. change the background color. leave the kitsus out of the shot, cus they look like they are penetrating you. i go with bal on the 6/10 there, but if you correct those things, its possible to acheive a full 8 or 9 out of ten. .
in all seriousness tho,
not a bad paint job for a first timer! good work!