A poem i suppose

[Guest]

Love found then lost.
God opened my eyes to the lie that i lived.
A just wish i could close them again.
All i had were dreams and wishes.
I died that day.
All truths shown and pain revealed.
I was stripped bear before you.
All i was shown true.
You showed me then the truth in life.
Happiness is but a wish and a dream.
Waiting to be shown for the lie that it is.
I hope one day you know what i felt.
So you know the pain that i went through.
To forget you....


I have never been very good at poems or anything like that but i thought i would throw this one out there for the true critics.
Enjoy.

 

[Mandolin]

I liked it very much actually. Even though its not UO themed.. I was able to relate it to many experiences in the game.. rp, events and even changes to the game itself.

Well done!

 

[Antion_Vallin]

<center>The Dancing Orc

A sight to behold yet best not seen...
A lumbering orc by the name of 'Thunk'.
Though kind at heart his actions are mean...
Be warry for when he backs up his junk!

</center>

 

[Cricketlighter]

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Love found then lost.
God opened my eyes to the lie that i lived.
A just wish i could close them again.
All i had were dreams and wishes.
I died that day.
All truths shown and pain revealed.
I was stripped bear before you.
All i was shown true.
You showed me then the truth in life.
Happiness is but a wish and a dream.
Waiting to be shown for the lie that it is.
I hope one day you know what i felt.
So you know the pain that i went through.
To forget you....


I have never been very good at poems or anything like that but i thought i would throw this one out there for the true critics.
Enjoy.

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It is wonderful! Do write more.

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